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I don't need your like or subscribtion, all I need is feedback, on what to improve. Yes, the footage is not mine, if you want to watch the footage without my edit, you can find links in descrption. This is my way to learn editing, if you want you can donate me a camera so I can start filming my own footage. and yes, i do know there is editing forums where I could ask for feedback, but i want to hear what the people who could actually watch my videos think about it
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Shiftyy 1/21/2018 8:55am
1/21/2018 8:55am
first vegan spotted, good thing i have some carrots lying around for them
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Shiftyy 1/21/2018 9:56am
1/21/2018 9:56am
hmmmm 95 views no feedback? cmon someone
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WCRider 1/21/2018 11:44am
1/21/2018 11:44am Edited Date/Time 1/21/2018 11:46am
Good edit imo but not fan of the song.

Hope to see an edit about KR94 with a song from Rammstein or an edit about ET3 with a song from slipknot (psychosocial or duality could be good).

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mooch 1/21/2018 12:07pm
1/21/2018 12:07pm
Negatory on the tunage.
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matze 1/21/2018 12:12pm
1/21/2018 12:12pm
pls stop
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YZfan1230 1/21/2018 2:10pm
1/21/2018 2:10pm
These types of videos make me hate the sport sometimes...
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cpyz300 1/21/2018 2:11pm
1/21/2018 2:11pm
Yeah, I gave it a watch because I thought the complaints we're coming from older guys wanting Metallica or something.

Nope theyre all right. That song has no place in Moto. Sorry dude, I couldn't stand to watch the actual edit through the music to give further feedback.
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NeedMoto 1/21/2018 3:11pm
1/21/2018 3:11pm
No bueno on the music. Felt like I was listening to a Nigerian bar band, at 2:00am in the morning after getting heavily intoxicated. Far more bike sound would be good. Maybe a little less jumping from scene to scene.

Will watch again if you re-edit.
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Phantom 661 1/21/2018 3:45pm
1/21/2018 3:45pm
I feel like I'm watching t.v. with the volume down while someone else is playing that (noise?)in the same room. I'm sorry, it doesn't do anything for me. That piece is disconnected from the action in my opinion. Find something that works with the motion going on. Good luck!
look out below 1/21/2018 5:07pm
1/21/2018 5:07pm
you should put better music on it. Like that new Joker Gang dude. he's great.
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aeffertz 1/21/2018 5:27pm
1/21/2018 5:27pm Edited Date/Time 1/21/2018 5:29pm
Shooting the clips is most important part. Slapping together clips that someone else put the work into setting up is effortless really.

Don't mean to discourage you but realistically you haven't done much of anything besides add a song you like and paste clips into a timeline. TO be fair, the general YouTube audience loves videos like this so pick music that won't get you a copywrite strike and you could make decent unethical ad money.

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